Nameless: Lance bad ends
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Nothing super bad, as it turns out! But now I am full of sad Lance feels ;_;
Ok so I looked up his bad ends and they're FINE. Yeonho is just special <3 I probably shouldn't find it endearing that he's the only one so far to try to murder Eri but...uh, anyway, Lance!
Bad end 1: Accident
Oh no I have to reject Lance a whoole bunch to get this one ;_;
(His ending jarred me a bit but I do really like Lance)
Haa so I just checked whether Korean has gendered pronouns and no it doesn't. This would explain why the text sometimes VERY OBVIOUSLY gets he and she mixed up. But there's various forms of "you" and I wish I knew which ones people were using.
Lance: If you lost me, would your sadness depend on the number of memories attached to me?
Eri: Yeah, probably
Me: I'M SORRY LANCE
FAIL MY EXAMS YOU SAY *cracks knuckles*
DAMMIT I ACCIDENTALLY GOT ONE RIGHT AND GOT A D+. That's still a fail, right??
The play goes as planned and Red kisses Eri. When she gets home she realises there are 20 missed calls from Lance. At home, he is frustrated, but she tells him to go rest, and then is overcome by tiredness herself.
Another dream of the dark figures on the white plane.
???: Are you really fine with this?
Nameless: Yes. Since it's no use if she doesn't meet me. If the piece isn't collected, she cannot come to me. So...get rid of her. If she's gone, I will feel like escaping this place. After I escape, I will turn this place into nothingness. Unless she comes to see me, my existence is worthless.
???: How will you pay the price of getting rid of her?
Nameless: I don't know. I will give you my memories, or even my soul...
???: Hmm. I won't anything but feathers in there though.
She takes a few steps forward, to see better...
There is a screech of tires and a loud shout. She's on a street in daylight, and is hit by a large truck.
Nameless: It's your fault for not collecting the piece.
THE END
Bad End: Broken Heart
When Lance is comforting Eri after his fever, instead of saying she's fine she stands up and looks at him.
Lance: Will you abandon me soon? It might be better if you were with Red. You'll forget me if you're with him.
Eri: Lance, what are you talking about? I would never...
Lance: Just get it over with! Destroy me now!
He forces her hand onto his chest and holds it uncomfortably tight
Lance: If you're going to abandon me, just take my soul so I don't feel anything! Everything my maker gave me is for you. Without you I...
Eri: Help! Lance is being weird!
Tei comes in and throws Lance to the ground.
Tei: Red, Yeonho, take her to her room. I'll take care of Lance.
Red: Don't worry, Tei will fix things!
Me, remembering how he 'fixed' Yeonho: D:
Red: Lance, you can have the room since you're sick, but I won't forgive you for messing with the heroine.
The next morning everyone is gloomy.
Tei: Don't be shocked by...
Eri runs in to see Lance. He's still in bed, not even breathing, and doesn't respond when she shakes him.
Red: I woke up and found him with something like feathers in his body.
Eri: Lance ;_;
Me: Lance ;_;
Nameless: He lost his feathers.
???: Will that be fine? The game has failed.
Nameless: Turn back time. That's what you do.
???: You talk as if that's easy. There will be a huge cost.
Nameless: What about the memories of that person looking at me? He's been watching us since this started.
...I was not expecting the first thing to call me "he" after figuring out I'm non-binary to be a an otome game but I'm surprisingly into it.
Nameless: The one watching us through the screen, looking into the person's brain with that weird machine. Yes, you. Now give me your memory.
???: That's a funny thought, but the person outside the screen is beyond my control. Of course, they might become my future client, haha. Now, what will you do? Will you continue the game?
This is way creepier because I happened to JUST be looking up the Korean for "you". The word he said sounded like "doh", which I can't find, but it seems like there's a whole byzantine system for avoiding saying "you", so.
THE END
Well! THAT WAS EFFECTIVELY DISQUIETING.
Yuri Route (all ends)
Nothing super bad, as it turns out! But now I am full of sad Lance feels ;_;
Ok so I looked up his bad ends and they're FINE. Yeonho is just special <3 I probably shouldn't find it endearing that he's the only one so far to try to murder Eri but...uh, anyway, Lance!
Bad end 1: Accident
Oh no I have to reject Lance a whoole bunch to get this one ;_;
(His ending jarred me a bit but I do really like Lance)
Haa so I just checked whether Korean has gendered pronouns and no it doesn't. This would explain why the text sometimes VERY OBVIOUSLY gets he and she mixed up. But there's various forms of "you" and I wish I knew which ones people were using.
Lance: If you lost me, would your sadness depend on the number of memories attached to me?
Eri: Yeah, probably
Me: I'M SORRY LANCE
FAIL MY EXAMS YOU SAY *cracks knuckles*
DAMMIT I ACCIDENTALLY GOT ONE RIGHT AND GOT A D+. That's still a fail, right??
The play goes as planned and Red kisses Eri. When she gets home she realises there are 20 missed calls from Lance. At home, he is frustrated, but she tells him to go rest, and then is overcome by tiredness herself.
Another dream of the dark figures on the white plane.
???: Are you really fine with this?
Nameless: Yes. Since it's no use if she doesn't meet me. If the piece isn't collected, she cannot come to me. So...get rid of her. If she's gone, I will feel like escaping this place. After I escape, I will turn this place into nothingness. Unless she comes to see me, my existence is worthless.
???: How will you pay the price of getting rid of her?
Nameless: I don't know. I will give you my memories, or even my soul...
???: Hmm. I won't anything but feathers in there though.
She takes a few steps forward, to see better...
There is a screech of tires and a loud shout. She's on a street in daylight, and is hit by a large truck.
Nameless: It's your fault for not collecting the piece.
THE END
Bad End: Broken Heart
When Lance is comforting Eri after his fever, instead of saying she's fine she stands up and looks at him.
Lance: Will you abandon me soon? It might be better if you were with Red. You'll forget me if you're with him.
Eri: Lance, what are you talking about? I would never...
Lance: Just get it over with! Destroy me now!
He forces her hand onto his chest and holds it uncomfortably tight
Lance: If you're going to abandon me, just take my soul so I don't feel anything! Everything my maker gave me is for you. Without you I...
Eri: Help! Lance is being weird!
Tei comes in and throws Lance to the ground.
Tei: Red, Yeonho, take her to her room. I'll take care of Lance.
Red: Don't worry, Tei will fix things!
Me, remembering how he 'fixed' Yeonho: D:
Red: Lance, you can have the room since you're sick, but I won't forgive you for messing with the heroine.
The next morning everyone is gloomy.
Tei: Don't be shocked by...
Eri runs in to see Lance. He's still in bed, not even breathing, and doesn't respond when she shakes him.
Red: I woke up and found him with something like feathers in his body.
Eri: Lance ;_;
Me: Lance ;_;
Nameless: He lost his feathers.
???: Will that be fine? The game has failed.
Nameless: Turn back time. That's what you do.
???: You talk as if that's easy. There will be a huge cost.
Nameless: What about the memories of that person looking at me? He's been watching us since this started.
...I was not expecting the first thing to call me "he" after figuring out I'm non-binary to be a an otome game but I'm surprisingly into it.
Nameless: The one watching us through the screen, looking into the person's brain with that weird machine. Yes, you. Now give me your memory.
???: That's a funny thought, but the person outside the screen is beyond my control. Of course, they might become my future client, haha. Now, what will you do? Will you continue the game?
This is way creepier because I happened to JUST be looking up the Korean for "you". The word he said sounded like "doh", which I can't find, but it seems like there's a whole byzantine system for avoiding saying "you", so.
THE END
Well! THAT WAS EFFECTIVELY DISQUIETING.
Yuri Route (all ends)
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Date: 2018-12-01 02:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-12-04 02:19 pm (UTC)Thank you! It's nice to know people enjoy them, I really enjoy writing them but they sometimes feel a bit self indulgent. The Tei post is in progress and shaping up to be...quite something.