The importance of composition
Aug. 2nd, 2008 04:43 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
alias_sqbrI was feeling a bit mopey and sick last night as I stayed at home watching Revolutionary Girl Utena instead of going to the Unisfa 30th. So once I was done watching, to cheer myself up I started drawing some fanart of the show.
It wasn't a fantastic drawing, but for something to do this morning I coloured it. Anyway, I was a having a look at it this afternoon, now I'm feeling a bit better, and made a few cosmetic changes, and was struck by what a difference cropping and rearranging can make.
Warning: it's an AU, but does kind of have spoilers for the show.
The name of the piece is "Happily Ever After", and it's a fairly obvious AU (if you've seen the show, and if you haven't you'll just have to watch it to find out :))
Spot the difference!
For the lazy: It's cropped, obviously, and I fixed the colouring issue with the hand (not sure how that happened!) But also I shifted over the window (thereby messing up my otherwise oh-so-perfect shading). I tried making the right hand curtain narrower but it didn't quite look right.
Anyway, would people agree it makes a big difference to the piece? There's a lot of other things I could fix, but I really don't care enough.
It wasn't a fantastic drawing, but for something to do this morning I coloured it. Anyway, I was a having a look at it this afternoon, now I'm feeling a bit better, and made a few cosmetic changes, and was struck by what a difference cropping and rearranging can make.
Warning: it's an AU, but does kind of have spoilers for the show.
The name of the piece is "Happily Ever After", and it's a fairly obvious AU (if you've seen the show, and if you haven't you'll just have to watch it to find out :))
Spot the difference!
For the lazy: It's cropped, obviously, and I fixed the colouring issue with the hand (not sure how that happened!) But also I shifted over the window (thereby messing up my otherwise oh-so-perfect shading). I tried making the right hand curtain narrower but it didn't quite look right.
Anyway, would people agree it makes a big difference to the piece? There's a lot of other things I could fix, but I really don't care enough.
