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Jun. 20th, 2006 08:25 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Spent today waiting for my supervisor to get back to me on my revisions based on her suggestions (in case you're wondering, she was happy with most of my corrections, so as long as she gets back to me soonish I'm on track and all is well) So, to fill in time I:
I don't expect people to reread them all, but look at the difference: Here's the original page 4 and here's the new version. Well, I'm proud of it anyway. And yes, they're a bit small now. Eh.
Oh, and can people tell what's going on in the new version of the Chapter 1 title page?
- napped
- watched "Jersey Girl" (odd mix of sentiment and crassness, but watchably mediocre)
- Redid all the text on those ACOS pages with handwritten text
I don't expect people to reread them all, but look at the difference: Here's the original page 4 and here's the new version. Well, I'm proud of it anyway. And yes, they're a bit small now. Eh.
Oh, and can people tell what's going on in the new version of the Chapter 1 title page?
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Date: 2006-06-20 12:42 pm (UTC)She's falling in the title page?
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Date: 2006-06-20 02:11 pm (UTC)I changed the image size, is it more readable now?
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Date: 2006-06-20 02:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-06-21 01:42 am (UTC)That's actually a link to nowhere (you forgot to chuck the URL in?). So it loops back to whatever page you're on when you happen to click on it.
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Date: 2006-06-21 03:51 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-06-21 03:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-06-21 04:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-06-21 04:10 am (UTC)For example, at the moment you're thinking about ... poached eggs.
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Date: 2006-06-21 04:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-06-21 04:22 am (UTC)Canberra is full of doppelgangers: people you meet who are exactly like someone you already know (even to the point of having the same name, interests, personality and physical appearance) but come from Sydney or Brisbane or somewhere else.
So far I've met doppelgangers of Leighton, Melissa and one of Max's friends ... I wonder if there's a doppelganger Sophie-who-likes-poached-eggs interfering with your brainwave signal.
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Date: 2006-06-21 07:11 am (UTC)....maybe I'm my own doppelganger! Eep!