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Date: 2020-02-03 09:16 pm (UTC)I think Mitsunari's massage and insult service would get plenty of customers.
I thought it was very clever how this cracky AU managed to preserve so much of Mitsunari's arc - his conflicts about sex and his own sexuality, his devotion to Hideyoshi and how that damages him, the way his problems aren't really solvable unless he leaves his current life path.
Let me know if you want spoilers for the other two routes. I loved Hideyoshi's route, I thought it was in some ways more emotionally coherent than his main route and did a great job of explaining why he's Like That. But I also completely understand being put off by him, I always find him to be right on the line between sweet and horrifying.