OMG ACOS

[alias_sqbr]

That's right, I have created a new page of ACOS! After six months off!

I'll almost certainly fiddle with it some more in the morning but I really wanted to get it out there, it's been a niggling itch in the back of my brain since last October.

The main problem was trying to figure out how to make the interview with Jalani anything but repetitive and dull, one of those terrible "recap the plot with lots of exposition" scenes. You might say "After a 6 month gap, and with several years of plot since you started, mightn't that be useful?" to which I reply "Yes, but I just can't be bothered". So I cut it out. I also have to decide how much of the originally fifteen year long flashback sequence I was planning on I'll keep. Right now I'm thinking 2-3 days. I want to get this thing finished before I die of old age.

Comments

[penchaft.livejournal.com]

I think Jalani's font should be a bit bigger, or the letters spread out a bit more (kerning? whatever?), or maybe both. It's a bit of a pain to read easily. :(

[alias_sqbr]

Is it better now?

[penchaft.livejournal.com]

Yes! I think so.

[ataxi.livejournal.com]

Oh no, you misspelt foreign!

[alias_sqbr]

Wait, I only misspelled one word? Sweet! :) (Photoshop has no in built spellchecker, and I have become depressingly reliant on such things)

[ataxi.livejournal.com]

If you were feeling happy about it ... there may well be other errors that my gaze didn't light upon!

(Actually, I checked again and the rest looked fine ;-)

[alias_sqbr]

Now if anyone complains I'll blame it on you, my beta :D

[nico-wolfwood.livejournal.com]

my sole response to this is: hee!

[alias_sqbr]

:)

I thought about getting you to beta it but wanted to get it done before I lost my momentum.